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The Wave

Sweet words for my little pet

Sweet words for my little pet
Lines requested, words unsaid
A warm voice deep inside your head
That makes you feel the wave

From meanings that transcend the line
To letters that will mingle time
The feeling that you are all mine
That makes you feel the wave

In moments you might be in bonds
In others being stringed along
A feeling of a deep belong
That makes you feel the wave

Always willing to appease
Living gladly for the tease
Finally there is release
That makes you feel the wave

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Anonymous
2 years ago
The first stanza's words sound simple yet they have a beautiful combination. I like how the lines rhymed with each other and the meaning it wants to convey is clear and well written. Its amazing that I can find all of these amazing traits in one package. But may I question what is this wave really about? I know as a reader/fan. I have a different perception of what could this wave be. In my opinion, it's a lot like a very exciting and overflowing feeling. But what could this wave really be? Is it something deeper that we could expect?
Nimja
2 years ago
Tempting - Tempting though it may be to lift the veil of mystery, I merely invite you to ask me in a more personal manner. Some things are too difficult to explain in public words.

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