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Chapter 6

Where Food is Served

Deirdre giggled a little as I blushed. I realized what I had said and the inevitable pink of shame tainted my cheeks. She really was looking very nice, she... My mind cast back to the many days and months, studying the Light in the Castle. There weren't many girls there and the other guys were usually much more popular. It's not that I was ugly, far from it in fact, most have commented that I am at least reasonably decent looking. But of course my often too honest way of thinking and, well, there was that other thing, made it sometimes difficult to connect with them. There had been times when I had more friends, when I was much younger, even holding hands with a girl one night. Most of that changed when the Castle called me, since then I'd mostly been a lone wanderer amongst the crowd, with maybe two friends. This girl, for some strange reason, intrigued me more than anyone I'd met before. She felt important. I got a grip on myself and took a small breath to avoid stumbling over what I was going to say next.

"Sorry, eh, I mean you look very pretty."

She smiled. "Yes, I thought that's what you meant." She curtsied a little. "Thank you, milord."

That wasn't fair, she made me blush a little more. "Stop that, I'd like to get us some food and something to drink, would you care to join me?"

She almost looked down at her stomach but restrained herself and just smiled. "Gladly."

We headed downstairs and sat down at a table, the innkeeper almost immediately came to us as if we were his most important customers. They really didn't get many ambassadors here then. He headed over to our table, nodding to some people on other tables. Most of them looked like they lived here and all knew each other. In a way we stood out as travellers, but no one really stared at us. We were young enough not to be a threat and my clothing suggested I was a messenger for the House.

Fortunately, he didn't bow or anything and his face was open and kind. "Food or drinks perhaps?"

I looked up at him. "Dinner and cider?"

He nodded. "Of course."
Victuals
"Thank you."

The innkeeper was about to turn around when a thought struck me. "Where could I get some minor provisions tomorrow morning?"

He turned back and smiled. "The master is a friend of mine, I'll get some ready. Don't worry about a thing."

He walked back to the bar again, talking for a short while with the patrons at another table. He must have instructed the barmaid, because she swiftly brought us two pints of cider, of course the food would take a little while. I took a moment to look around and noticed that there were maybe three other people eating as well. The food looked quite decent for a place like this. Very wholesome and tasty looking. Deirdre been looking around as well, but her gaze was now resting on me with a thoughtful spark behind it. I wondered what was going on in her mind.

"Taran, why are you doing all of this?"

I blinked. "All of what?"

"Giving me food, clothes, helping me."

I wasn't sure how to answer. "It felt like the right thing to do, you didn't seem dangerous, and it looked like you escaped from somewhere. The least I could do is get you to town." I thought for just a moment. "Besides, I like the company."

She blushed a little. "It doesn't bother you that..."

I shook my head. "It really doesn't bother me."

"Thanks.. Eh... Would you mind if I stayed with you for a while? I mean, you're going back to Dawnbridge, right?"

I nodded. "Alright, but on one condition." I tried to sound grave, as if I was going to ask something terrible.

She looked a little worried. "Which is?"

It was hard not to smile. "You'll have to tell your story."

She looked at my serious face, then into my eyes and smiled. "You would have taken me even if I didn't tell you now, wouldn't you?"

"Yes."

"Alright, then I will tell you."

As I smiled thankfully, the barmaid came with two plates and a bowl of food. She put the plates in front of us and the bowl in the middle of the round table, then curtsied slightly as she went off. She didn't really smile at us or anything, but she looked very busy in a good way. I almost felt guilty for looking at her, why? I shook my head a little and looked at the food. The wooden plate was filled with some stalks, chicken and bread. The bowl between us held some gravy-like substance that smelled a little saltier than the rest, to dip the bread in. It made my stomach growl with hunger, causing a smile to appear on Deirdre's face. She, however, looked possibly even hungrier. I wondered when she had eaten last.

I smiled. "Let's dig in."

Comments

Antonious
3 years ago
Poker face - Not a very good poker player he would make. But that is what comes of being either too honest or unskilled in the ways of masking his thoughts.
Nimja
3 years ago
Honesty - It's both a blessing and a curse.
OhPun
3 years ago
phrasings - I wondered what the last time was she ate.
could be
I wondered when the last time she ate was.
I wondered when was the last time she ate.
I wondered when she had eaten last.
I wondered when she had last eaten.

If you're always honest, you don't have to worry about remembering your lies.
OhPun
3 years ago
phrasings - * as I blushed, I realized
should be
as I blushed. I realized

or

Deirdre giggled a little as I blushed, I realized
should be
Deirdre giggled a little. As I blushed, I realized

* studying the light
should be
studying the Light

otherwise he sounds like a painter, "studying the light in the castle."

* even a girlfriend thing once, but nothing rather special.
Good thing she dumped him, if he did not think his girlfriend special. Also, "girlfiend thing?" Apparently he worked hard to be alone.

* They really didn't get much ambassadors here then
should be
They really didn't get many ambassadors here then

* I'll set some ready.
should be
I'll get some ready.

* you didn't seem dangerous and
should be
you didn't seem dangerous, and

Can you do a different set of code words for this story?
Nimja
3 years ago
Rephrasings - Especially the girlfriend bit was changed. I wanted it more to sound like 'love' between really young children. Not a relationship.

Also, what do you mean by 'set of code words'?

The title?
OhPun
3 years ago
code words - By code words, I mean the verification codes we need to type in to verify that we are human, not some spam-bot. They are Frozen Youth themed. I would never criticize your titles.
OhPun
3 years ago
young love - The following is, as usual, my opinions. Please disregard if they don't match with your ideas.

I'm not liking the "playful fun amongst youth" because young people never see it that way. Also, what is "youth" from this young person's perspective? First love is always important and dramatic, even if all you do is hold hands. Specifics make a more interesting story. How about something like:

I had some vague friends. When I was ten, I had a girlfriend, but she found a new boyfriend when I went to study at the Castle. Although we exchanged words of love, maybe she was too young to really know what love was.
Nimja
3 years ago
Rephrased again - I hope this is even better now. I like suggestions when the reasons behind them are explained. In this case you made a good point.

Also, the CAPTCHA words (look it up, that's what they're called) are changed now.
OhPun
3 years ago
typo - There have been times
should be
There had been times

CAPTCHA - I learn something new every day.
Nimja
3 years ago
Thats - That's called 'living' ^_^

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