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Chapter 66

Of Sticks and Stones

Maeve walked up to us, her naked skin glowing even in the cave. The charm around her had been toned down a little, but it still held some sway over us. Of course our awareness of it, did make it easier to cope with. Her charm was like the sweet smell of a freshly baked pie. The smell would be perfect, rich and alluring, but the pie had razorblades in it.

Maybe not the best simile ever, but it helped me keep my mind clear.

"Her elements..." A thought from my studies arrived. "The four elements?"

Deirdre spoke. "No, five."

"Fire, earth, air, water and?"

She smiled. "Life."

Maeve. "Deirdre is right. There are five elements. Let me show you something they probably didn't teach you."

The Five Elements

She drew a simple pentagram on the ground with lines that appeared to glow slightly. I wasn't even sure how she actually did the drawing, as she didn't hold anything in her hands. Anyway, she made a symbol at each point. The top point was two lines making a leaf, then clockwise; two lines moving up, like wind, two lines depicting hills, two wavy lines upward and two wavy lines sideways. I recognized the elements, air, earth, fire and water. And I assumed the top one was life.

But I'd never seen it drawn like this before.

Maeve looked at us. "Have you seen this before?"

"No." I spoke softly.

Deirdre nodded. "I have."

Maeve. "Life at the top, connected to fire and earth as life needs the sun and earth to grow. Water and air are needed as well but not directly. Each line is a connection, each missing line is a sign that they don't mix well. Can you match it to your dreams now, Taran?"

I started with life, the forest. Then to fire. The next dream was earth to life, water to earth, air to water and fire to air. Alright, at least I saw the connection and the odd path I had walked. But why?

"I suppose I understand this now. But why the dreams?"

Maeve giggled. "Well, I suppose those wishing to use the elements need to meet them first."

Deirdre blinked. "Why him and not me?"

She smiled at her. "You have... other qualities which, I'm sure, will display themselves again."

I tried to keep up. "You mean I can use the elements in my magic? Create fire, destroy earth?"

Maeve laughed. "You are the sun and moon, you can do almost anything. The problem is that it takes a lot of training to do a small thing." She handed me a dry twig. I didn't know from where she made that appear, but I wasn't going to ask now. "Try and make fire on this."

Manipulating the elements was something only a lucky few of the Masters could do. Pushing an element was easy, making fire burn hotter or almost dousing it. Actually creating an element felt a lot harder. But... Weren't all elements present in the world around us, even if we couldn't see them. They were there in potential. Almost there, they just needed a little push.

I focused on the dry twig, trying to see the fire that hid beneath the surface. And I found it. While my head hurt with concentration, I could feel how I pushed against the fire in the wood, making it stronger, urging it on.

The tiniest of flames licked the surface of the twig. Visible only because of the darkness in the cave. Though it gave me great pleasure, my mind was less happy about the situation. I tried to calm down, my fingers clenched around the twig.

Deirdre smiled at me. "Very nice, Taran! I saw it too."

Maeve spoke softly. "I'm sorry I can't teach you more Taran. You'll have to practice on your way back to Dawnbridge."

"Yes... That reminds me, where are we?"

She smiled. "I've asked... some friends to transport you here. This is a hidden cave not far from Dawnbridge. The sun is rising now. If you hurry, you can reach the city by nightfall."

Deirdre looked at me. "Won't they be suspicious if we arrive this quickly?"

I shook my head. "We've stayed in Rockwall for almost as long as we needed to get there. And we 'lost' a day coming here. But what about horses?"

Maeve nodded. "I've arranged two horses. Though the other two were not keen to see you go. They are saddled up and ready. One thing though."

"Yes?"

"They are a bit... wild. They've had us on their backs, but no humans. They're clever though."

Well... That was a relief.

Comments

Antonious
3 years ago
Elemental - This newly exposed ability of Taran's gives me the feeling the when compared to the ordinary people who can use light or dark, Taran is an order of magnitude more capable and by that thought much more dangerous than even an ordinary master. He must learn control of his abilities quickly or he could be more dangerous to himself and Deirdre than most potential enemies.
Nimja
3 years ago
Order of magnitude - Well, with strong ones, that is their curse. Control or be controlled by it. The dreams didn't just serve as a 'get to know' but also as a firm warning. He got to see the calm and wild part of each element.

Btw. I've tried to make the element symbols original and unlike most symbols we know. ^_^ I wonder if I did a good job.
OhPun
3 years ago
symbols - It is hard to do completely original. I like your concept of two curved lines for each element. The water symbol is commonly two wavy lines in parallel, not touching as you have done. The fire symbol looks like a flame which is a common fire symbol. Wind/air is sometimes symbolized with lines that curl on the ends. I like your life and earth symbols. All around you have a very cool design.

So each girl in the dreams has two sisters, but not the same two sisters as her other sisters.

feel how I pushes
should be
feel how I pushed

We've stayed there for almost
is confusing should it be
We've stayed here for almost
Nimja
3 years ago
Yay - Yay for cool design. ^_^
Eldoran
3 years ago
Elemental theory - After Nimjas answer to my theory to 2 sets of 3 sisters after the third dream. It wouldn't contradict the known things at that point I had the suspicion that sister was just another term for something else similar to the Mother on Maeve. That together with the remark to one remaining element, which makes five only left one answer - the sisters must mean something else which allowed for the two "sisters" of something not to be a "sister" to each other. The point I was most curious about was the exact nature of the fifth element (life), I knew it should have some connection to growing/plants. I assumed the other four were the usual water/air/fire/earth, but it has been ambiguous enough in the dreams to be somewhat uncertain.
So to prevent spoiling the fun for everybody else, I waited till a few days after the last dream.

Deidres special power on the other hand should be connected to the visions (the insights about Tarans dreams while half asleep and the dream about the cage location at least indicate that)
Nimja
3 years ago
Clever - But is it clever enough ;-)

Of course, some elements are more easily manipulated than others.

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