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Chapter 83

Of Birds and Blood

Eavan was as beautiful and naked as always. Her naked skin reflecting brightly in the sun, a stark contrast to the men in front of us. While I didn't want to look at her and lose the men out of sight, it was hard to ignore her presence. She walked forwards, stepped between us and looked at the men judging. It was kind of weird, she looked tired, as if from running, but not at all nervous or worried. In fact, it was more as if she was having fun.

Her voice was playful and lustful, but enforcing as well. "Leave now and I will let you."

The man was obviously angered by this, but his surprised made him speak rather than attack. "You can't make us."

Eavan didn't respond, she just looked up for a moment, a glance we all followed. A large bird, smaller than an eagle but definitely a bird of prey, was already in a dive. Nothing but a blur for us, a dark feathered blur, but red streaks on the man's cheeks betrayed what had happened. The man didn't even have time to lift his sword. He reached for his right cheek with his left hand and touched it gingerly. It looked quite deep and painful, blood flowing out over his neck.

He was obviously considering his options.

Eavan spoke again, her voice darker now. There was still something... tempting about it. Pain could be a temptation, but this time it wasn't meant to be pleasure or even teasing. Just pain. Her voice was not loud, but easily heard over all the soft sounds of the forest and the lake.

"I will not warn you again."

The man clenches his fist around his sword but put it back in it's sheath. "We're going."

The other two looked surprised and relieved of their master's decision. Their swords were put away as well as they turned around. The three of them turned their backs to us and started to walk away. But this wasn't right. If they just left, we'd be attacked in town or anywhere. That would make it even worse. And I didn't want to rely on the forest Spirits for help.

They and helped us too much already.

"Stop." I tried to sound fierce.

The man turned around, looking at me with an indifferent expression on his face. I was not worth his attention to him.

"Vanish. It's a bad idea to let them know you failed and there are things going on that you do not want to be part of. We have no grudge against you as you're just following orders, but make sure the next orders don't get you killed."

To my surprise the man smiled a little. He was tempted to say something as he opened his mouth just a bit but thought the better of himself. Instead he just smiled and bowed very subtly to the three of us. He nodded to his companions and changed direction directly into the forest.

That made me feel better.

We waited for a few moments after the guys had truly walked away before we turned to each other again. Eavan took a step forwards and turned around. Her back was now to the departed men but she didn't look worried at all. In this triangle there were a lot of things I'd love to ask, but I waited as she looked up. The bird, I still wasn't quite sure what kind, landed on her outstretched arm. It looked painful, those claws around her wrists, but she didn't look bothered.

This time I beat Deirdre to the question. "How did you get here?"

Eavan smiled. "I ran."

She was teasing us and Deirdre had the guts to ask her directly. "Be clearer."

She smiled again, a little nicer this time. "Animals saw you sneaking, I wasn't too far away so I came. Of course it was a bit of a run, but I liked it."

I smiled back. "And the bird?"

She shrugged. "There's always friends around."

The mood was already lifting. It was good to have her around. In a way she was nicer than Maeve, but that was probably because there was less burden on her shoulders. On her arm, the bird still rested. It had dark brown plumage and a light beak, but I still had no idea what it was. I'd seen hunting birds before, but I don't think I saw this one.

There was still blood on it's claws.

Blood.

That reminded me.

"Eavan, why did you draw our blood before?"

She giggled. "That? I thought you could figure that out easily."

I sighed a little. "Just tell us."

"To make a fake trail, of course."

Comments

Eldoran
3 years ago
fake trail - That explanation doesn't sound that plausible. I mean if there is no story-world specific reason, the means don't match the effect.
As they were riding the most obvious trail would be the trail of their horses, which can simply be sent somewhere to make a trail. Besides on the road there should be little visible trail anyway. So this is more likely scent based, like dogs which could probably be swayed directly and if not, the amount of blood drawn should be far more than necessary (they even passed out due to blood loss) unless this should fake a fatal attack, which in turn should be mostly moot as they arrived visibly alive in Dawnbridge. So either she wasn't telling the (whole) truth, fairies have a very strange concept of helping or there is some unknown fact about magic/fairies/world driving the decision. (This could even be something like "I forgot you aren't part of the fairy-hive-mind - oops...")

(I hope this wasn't a major plot-hole)
iitrnr
3 years ago
thanks - I had read Frozen Youth a while ago. Liked it a lot. Found Twilight yesterday....had to read it all in one go. Enjoyed it so far. Thanks.
Nimja
3 years ago
No plot hole - Maybe I was not clear enough.

This is when they were moved by the forest spirits. The idea is to have two trails, one of the blood (stronger scent) and one of them being moved (very subtle scent, as they're being carried). There were also other reasons why she did it like that.

Also, they didn't pass out through blood loss, mostly charm. Not THAT much blood was taken. It was just a cut in the hands, so it couldn't flow that fast. To quote from chapter 63; "I felt lighter. It wasn't just the loss of blood either."

And thank you Iitrnr for that lovely compliment!
Eldoran
3 years ago
resolved - Now that everything is in-story explained (next chapter). I have to admit guessing right on the reasons, without knowing the several not real-world related aspects is quite difficult, but so far everything fits quite well together. Definitely better than frozen youth did, as there are several open plot threads and many more unknown mystical factors which can lead to strange situations, but things fit well together looking back (there were a few out of character parts and some story elements that didn't really fit together in frozen youth).
Nimja
3 years ago
Kinda hoping - I'm kind of hoping to grow/evolve as a writer as well...

*smiles*

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